about me

This is a presentation about me and my family.

My learning Goal in the classroom this term is to improve my writing.  

To achieve my goal I need to make sure I reread my writing so that it makes good sense.

There was a pirate called Mighty man sitting on a big grey rock eating coconuts and there was a little boat on the sandy beach Call come along. The captain mighty man red pirate jacket lay on the sand because he was hot. After the pirates had eaten they went started to  hunt  for teaser under the sandy beach.When they found it on the cross he dig and dig and he finally found something.  Mighty man took a look in the treasure and when he look in it there  was nothing in it. When he looked in it he decided to take the box into the ship that was anchored in the deep blue sea.

Getting up in the morning. I feel lazy when my mum tells me to get ready for school. I snuggle into my blankets.When I snuggle into my blankets I feel cosy and warm so when my mother told me to get up for school.

I look at the time and it was 8.30 so I ran to my room and get dressed quickly,wash my face,brush my teeth, brush my hair and had breakfast so I run outside to go to school on our car.

Using Netbook

The reason why I like using my Netbook is because I like doing my work on the internet and because I don't need to write in my book with a pencil and paper.

My internet is going so well but before it wasn't  because I was using TLN (Manaiakalani) but now I am using Wairehe.

On Saturday some of our school people went out for a trip to the telecom Christmas tree
When the bus arrived we started to go inside the bus I went with my dad so we started to go.Next we got there around 8pm and it was snowing and there were lots of people. There were three telecom santa line so I went inside and wish for something.

When we got started I was wondering around with my friends under the the christmas tree.So when it was 8 30pm it was cool beacuse the titanium was there and it was lots of fun when they
were finish they even signed my t-shirt. When it was 9:00 Oscar was here too and he rang santa
and santa made some jokes and it wasn’t funny at all so we had to ‘say ho ho ho’ So the christmas tress was on and it was beautiful.

I like to thank Courtney and Cathryn for inviting us to watch the Christmas tree.  

Best Friend

Hi my name is Eleva.The story I will like to share with you is about When I first Meet my Best Friend.

When we were small we were at the same preschool. Even since when we were 5 year old.When I meet my first friend I was excited to see her.

Having best friends is so cool because you can have someone to play and also talk with.

When she left I felt like I had no sister and no one to play or talk she was a kind friend to me.