TEAM WORK from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

This movie is about team work

My sister called Kaloni has long black straight hair and she 14 at  June the 9 and was born in 1999 and she has dark brown eyes and brown skin and she is tall as a tree and loud as a monkey. She is a drama queen and sometimes lazy at home and at school and she is also sometimes bossy.She goes Tamaki College.She is intelligent when she is a hard worker.She Cheeky and sometime bounces back to my mum. She likes to play lot of sport also singing and she really like to drum at home,school and places. I like to play with my sister outside and going out with her.

This movie is about my digital footprint about when you are online. For example When you are doing something stupid online and you go to your history and you trash out something bad you have done you are leaving a digital footprint. 

 

Eleva - Digital Footprint from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Show Not Tell

Standing on the concrete makes my feet stream like I was on the BBQ. Touching my forehead while it was dripping I felt my head was boiling.Wiping  my head    

A gril who was sacred.

This morning we all completed our first Writing Sample for 2013.
I have posted it just as a wrote it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given.


One day there was a  girl and boys called Mary and Luke and they were 19 and 9 they once live in a big huge house called the Dally House.The next morning Mary woke up and as soon she woke up Mary ran down the stair to see what she can make for her and Luke.After When Mary finish making the food  Luke woke up and came down with a smile face as he came down he told Mary he going to start school so they ate and when it was 8.30 am Mary made his lunch  and Luke went up stairs to get really for school.

When it was 9.00.am Mary went and drove Luke to school at fancier primary school.
When they  got there she wave goodbye and said I’ll come and pick you up at 3.00.pm so she went of home to get really to go shopping for there shoes so she went home and got really.Later some random person said open the door with a low voice so she went down stair  to open the door but when she got to the door she was sacred.

Because she saw a man holding something on his he so she ran and lock every door or a window that was open so she really wanted to go shopping for their shoes.
Lucky Because she had her phone with her  so she rang the police with tears on her face.